i need some help!

[plse hlp]with my;zombie,beat down mixed up deck
MONSTERS:22
1 Vampire Lord
1 Jinzo
2 Ryu Kokki
1 Tribe Infecting Virus
1 Sinister Serpent
1 Sprirt Reaper
1 Injection Fairy Lily
1 Cyber Jar
1 Witch Of The Black Forest
3 Pyramid Turtle
3 Regenerating Mummy
1 Berserk Gorilla
2 Royal Keeper
1 Night Assailant
1 Mystic Swordsman lv2
1 Yata Garusa

SPELL:14
1 Change of Heart
1 Premature Burial
1 Monster Reborn
1 Harpie's Feather Duster
1 Heavy Storm
1 United We Stand
1 Swords or Revealing Light
1 Raigeki
1 Pot of Greed
1 Dark Hole
1 Snatch steal
1 Call Of The Mummy
1 Book Of Life
1 Offerings To The Doomed

TRAP:7
1 Call Of The Haunted
1 Mirror Force
1 Imperial Order
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Solemn Judgement
1 Raigeki Break
1 Mirror Wall

[Unimatrix]

Some one help this dude out i know alot of people dont like the zombie cookie cutterds but at least reply to the tread!!!

Well nobleman of crossout would be pretty good as well as "ring of destruction".

[maku]

why doesnt anyone use fusion ruschi (i can;t remember how to spell it)
drop u're assailant and the swordsman

I have a Fushioh Richie, i just dont have a great dezard to run him.

hhm.....heavy storm is quite pointless when uv already got harpies feather duster....

i usually prefer having a lot of lv.4 monsters in my deck, as oposed to a load of magic and trap cards. thats probably cos mystic tomato and sangan are to blame (u just gotta love those guys), but anyways - a few of my faves include -
slate warrior (hes damn hard to get though...)
wall of illusion (nice defence and effect)
hmmm....castle of dark illusions is good for a zombie-type deck.....(as far as i can remember...)

^^
meh...that wasnt too helpful......

Drop yata he is fiend, One regen mummy, Mystic sword lv2, and SIniter Get a 2nd nite assaliant.

Well there are a few big problems with your deck you only have 1 V. Lord you should have 2. Also you only have 1 spirit reaper and 1 book of life HELLO you are trying to make a good ZOMBIE DECK you need AT least 3 book of life also 2 spirit reapers will help.you also need some dark cores so you can remove your oppents monsters from play then special some them with book of life and remove some more monsters of his from play, you should also try to throw in exciled force it will also destroy some more of your opponets monster. They will HELP