Zombie Deck Twice Removed

I understand that a second V-Lord is in optimal view for me in this day and age, but I will not include it until that day comes. Until then, here is my colossal deck of many beatings and such.

Monsters: 15

Vampire Lord
2x Ryu kokki
Despair from the Dark (V-Lord to sub in for this)
3x Pyramid Turtle
3x Spirit Reaper
Witch (otBF)
Sangan
Tribe-Infector
Sinsiter Serpent
Cyber Jar

Spells: 19

Dark Hole
Raigeki
Heavy Storm
Harpie's Feather Duster
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Monster Reborn
Change of Heart
Premature Burial
Snatch Steal
Painful Choice
Delinquent Duo
The Forceful Sentry
Nobleman of Crossout
Mystical Space Typhoon
Call of the Mummy
3x Book of Life

Traps: 6

Ceasefire
Magic Cylinder
Ring of Destruction
Imperial Order
Torrential Tribute
Call of the Haunted

This deck has nerves of steel! (make it better please for all you deck fixers out there...)

Hey, I know it's perfect and all but at least someone give me some dap will ye?

get 1 giant rat

ok look i love the deck i just want to know how your deck is one big or serveral combos im new

1 Giant Rat.... I might consider this opportunity.

As for any combos, I don't have any main ones besides the basic "trying to swarm the field with zombies with my resources as fast as I can, then attacking for the win."

Ceasefire is my backup finisher for when I do have a multitude of zombies out after an attack, for a simple Ceasefire should kill my opponent off.

It's one big circus!

[FiendMasterCVN]

add in a giant rat difinelty

Are you saying you refuse to put in two V-lords!?!?!?!?!?! are you insane?
And why do you have three spirit reapers? Two is enough trust me. Also you need more beatstick monsters, like regenerating mummy and such

[maku]

I'm not that good with zombie decks but here's my go at one

Zombies': appox 16-19 monsters
x1 despair from the dark (if this is discarded by delinquent duo, the affect activates? or does the "off timing" rule affect this card as well)/ x1 mobius the frost monarch
x2 ryu kokki/x1 1 ryu kokki x1 Jinzo
x2 vampire lord
x2 regenerating mummy
x3 pyramid turtle
x1 sangan
x1 witch of the black forest
x1 cyber jar
x1 tribe-infecting virus
x1 sinster serpent
x1-2 sprirt reaper (3 is too much; as firehound said)

Spells:
x3 book of life
x2 call of the mummy
x2 book of moon
x1 pot of greed
x1 painful choice
x1 Dark Hole
x1 Raigeki
x1 Heavy Storm
x1 Harpie's Feather Duster
x1 Graceful Charity
x1 Monster Reborn
x1 Change of Heart
x1 Premature Burial
x1 Snatch Steal
x1 Delinquent Duo
x1 The Forceful Sentry
x2 Nobleman of Crossout
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps:

x1 Magic Cylinder
x1 Ring of Destruction
x1 Imperial Order
x1 Torrential Tribute
x1 Call of the Haunted