Help with my deck (Begginer)

I was wanting to build a strong deck with high atk monster with low lvl here is how it looks now.
Any suggertions would be appriciaited.

Monsters(24):

1x Hoshiningen
1x Blue eyes white dragon
1x Mystical elf
1x Opticlops
1x Prickle Fairy
1x kaiser sea horse
1x Enraged battle ox
1x Battle Ox
1x Curse Of Dragon
1x Skull red bird
1x Trap master
1x La jin the mysticla genie of the lamp
1x The dragon dewling in the cave
1x Ryu - kishin powered
1x Hyozanrya
1x Hane hane
1x Witch of the Black Forest
1x Tyhone
1x Battle steer
1x Rogue Doll
1x Koumori Dragon
1x Luster dragon #2
1x Lord Of D.
1x Paladin Of White Dragon

Spells(12):

1x De spell
1x premature burial
1x Rush reclessly
1x Tribute to the doomed
1x Fissure
1x Monster reborn
1x Soul exchange
1x Change of heart
1x mountain
1x Megamorph
1x Flute of summong dragon
1x White Dragon Ritual

Traps(7):

1x D. tribe
1x Burst breath
1x Begone, Knave
1x ultimate Offering
1x Shadow Spell
1x Dust torando
1x Trap hole

Any one?.....................

[SecretSpikeyX]

well, lemme ask u if theres a theme. its usually easier if there was a theme to help out...

Originally Posted by SecretSpikeyX

well, lemme ask u if theres a theme. its usually easier if there was a theme to help out...

i agree looks like ure friend just put in some random cards themes help out i have alot of decks like earth swarm and i have a light deck .. strike ninja ill send u one if ure looking for ideas just pm me

Originally Posted by SecretSpikeyX

well, lemme ask u if theres a theme. its usually easier if there was a theme to help out...

I was thiniking of Beatdown...

haha a beatdown with this? No dude what u got going with this is definatly a starter deck kaiba, if u want a beatdown youll need to start getting more 1800, 1900, and 2000 four star monster (mainly 1900, and 2000, but starting if like that is a bit harder), then what i did in my beatdown is i got a jinzo and a spell canceller to exclude any magic and traps and make it just brute strength, then i pulled some good equip cards from packs increasing the power of my monsters (equipp cards are good for beatdowns) You should have a wicked-breaking flamberge which adds 500 to the equip monster and when that equip monster attacks a face down monster the effect isnt applied (highly recomend getting that equipped to a jinzo or spell canceller) i know im rambling on bout my deck my i have alot of good stratagies for that deck that could be usefull IM me if youd like to hear more

all i got to say is make a theme

[FiendMasterCVN]

omg your deck is totally random i say just trash it and STICK TO A THEME!!!