ANYbody want to help this deck out im going to a tourney

Hows this beatdown.....



Tributes:
Injection Fairy Lily
Summoned Skull x2
Jinzo
Spell Canceller


Normal:

Obnoxious Celtic Gaurd
Archfiend Soldier x3
Berserk Gorilla x3
Amazoness Swords Woman
Goblin Attack Force
Mad Dog of Darkness x2
Battle Footballer x2
Witch of the Black Forest
Mataza the Zapper
Man Eater Bug x2


Magic:
Raigeki
Monster Reborn
Dark Core
Mask of Dispel
Creature Swap
Axe of Despair
Tribute to the Doomed
SORL
Change of Heart
Wicked-Breaking Flamberge- Baou
Nobleman of Crossout
Pot of Greed


Traps:
COTH
Magic Jammer
Waboku
Shadow Spell
Trap Hole
Torrential Tribute
Seven Tools


Total:

ANy Ideas to make it better??? Ive changed it again anything else

anybody have any ideas? aslo if you could i want to make it legal for tourneys (advanced theme) so if someone could come up with an idea for that too

anyone plezz.... mabey its just so bad no one will try and fix it......damnit......i hate my life.....im going to go cry now...umm...dont even try and stop me..

lets see....going for beatdown...
take out these cards
Newdoria
Obnoxious Celtic Gaurd
La Jinn x2
Gearfried x2
Berserk Gorilla x2
Goblin Attack Force
Opticlops
Mad Dog of Darkness x2
Witch of the Black Forest
Gagagigo x2


also add some more staples like
fiber jar
cyber jar


You might also want to add some cards that remove your opponents monsters...
man eater bug
penguin soldier

since you are going for beatdown....I would take out masked beast altogether
Add these cards:
enraged battle ox
dark driceratops
gemini elf
luster dragon(the 1900 att one)

hope this helps

The masked beast is a poor choice - rituals always end up jammed, destroyed, undrawn, or worse. You're not even running the seeker cards to pull him and his ritual out. Remove, and put it something that pulls a theme together. If not a theme, at least a solid strategy. La Jinn is not as good as Archfiend Soldier.

Anybody want to help this deck out i edited it, its new

get
3 archfiend soldiers and 1 more gorilla
if you get these cards takeout 2 lajinn and 2 gearfried

ok thx ill do that

any new ideas i added injection fairy lily and 3 archfiend

I need some ideas on how to to keep LP up with Injection fairy lily with as little amount of cards as possibler