Rate my Deck

Well, this id my deck, anything with a * by it, means that im just trying it out. ive been playing this game ever since it came out, and i come up with origonal decks, it just annoying, cuz its like every one has the same deck nowadays..any way here it is

Monsters (22)
1x 4-stayed ladybug of doom
1x nobelman-eaterbug *
1x Homunculus the alchemic being
1x penguin soldier
1x spirit reaper
2x giant orc
1x man-eater bug
2x mirage dragon
2x red-eyes black dragon
1x harpie lady 3 *
1x sinister serpent *
2x red-eyes black chick
1x witch of the black forest
1x cyber jar
1x mystical elf
1x magician of faith
1x twin-headed behemoth *
1x Neo aqua bmadoor *

Trap (8)
1x dust tornado
1x spellbinding circle
1x shadow spell
1x trap hole *
1x torrential tribute
1x magic cylinder
1x call of the haunted
1x waboku

Spell(14)
1x dark hole
1x reload
1x flint
1x pot of greed
1x change of heart
1x scapegoat
1x creature swap
1x giant trunade
1x premature burial
1x level limit-area B *
1x swords of reveling light
1x raigeki
1x monster reborn
1x graceful charity


Well let me know what you think....

[maku]

I think this deck can do good things... u want me to fix anything?

well i fixed my deck up some more. it now looks like this, so tell me witch one you think is better, and if you have any suggestions....let me know

MONSTERS
2x Red eyes black chik
2x red eyes
1x sinster serpent
1x homunculus the alchemic being
1x spirit reaper
1x 4-stared lady bug of doom
2x mirage dragon
1x aitsu
1x mystical elf
1x x-head cannon
1x penguin soldier
1x beta the manget warrior
1x man eater bug
1x nin-ken dog
2x giant orc
1x cyber jar
1x magician of faith
1x koitsu

SPELL
1x swords of revealing light
1x monster reborn
1x graceful charity
1x infinite cards
1x premature burial
1x level limit area b
1x creature swap
1x giant trunade
1x dark hole
1x pot of greed
1x reload
1x raigeki
1x change of heart
1x scapegoat


TRAP
1x spell binding circle
1x dust tornado
1x call of the haunted
1x torrential tribute
1x waboku
1x shadow spell
1x magic cylender
1x mirror wall

Whats the whole theme to this deck? Whats the objective of this deck? If you can explain a theme to this whole thing, we may be able to help out more.

[uiyer2174]

Im really sorry to say this but this sux bad,your playing traditional for the jesus of suburbias sake!!!

-aitsu
-koitsu
-nin ken dog
-man eater bug
-mystical elf(sux whorably)
-beta
-x head
-infinite cards
-waboku
-spellbinding
-shadow spell


+lightning vortex
+yata
+bls
+ced
+dd warriorlady
+2-3 dd assailants
+ring of destruction
+sangan
+witch


it still needs alot of work but this should help

p.s. this awful deck proves that only beginners play with the traditional format,no offense man!

God damnit, stop trying to kill originality. Traditional is not all chaos. In a local metagame, chaos may be too expensive. You ARE being offensive. Chaos can, and has, been beaten in traditional before - I recall defeating a guy who had the additional cards you mentioned, when I was playing a screwed up deck with LEGENDARY JUJITSU MASTER.
Admittedly, I would still take out Aitsu and Koitsu. The combo doesn't really work without 3 Mother Grizzly. This deck is a themeless general deck - which may win sometimes, but theme is key.

[uiyer2174]

The whole point is thats a traditional deck,no witch/sangan,this deck is awful and i could beat it with my advanced deck hands down!!!!!!!!!!!!

[uiyer2174]

buy a zombie structure deck and play it it would be better!!!!!!!!!!!

[FiendMasterCVN]

whoa can you say oldddddd cards well what kind of theme is this?