Nils Rakghul

[Master Moja]

Nils Rakghul
Planeswalker - Nils
[+2] Each opponent loses 1 life.
[-3] Target player discards 2 cards and loses 3 life.
[-8] You get an emblem with "Whenever an opponent would lose life, they lose twice that much life instead. Whenever an opponent would discard one or more cards, they discard twice that many cards instead."
{3}

Tell me what you think!

[fallenonme]

You get an emblem with "For the rest of the game, whenever an opponent loses life, they lose twice that much life instead. If an opponent would discard one or more cards, they discard twice that many cards instead."

[Master Moja]

You get an emblem with "For the rest of the game, whenever an opponent loses life, they lose twice that much life instead. If an opponent would discard one or more cards, they discard twice that many cards instead."

Thank you very much!

What do you think of the card though? Solid?

[kcon]

Nils Rakghul
Planeswalker - Nils
[+2] Each opponent loses 1 life.
[-3] Target player discards 2 cards and loses 3 life.
[-8] You get an emblem with "For the rest of the game, whenever an opponent would lose life or be dealt damage, they lose twice that much life and twice as much damage. If an opponent would discard a card(s), they discard twice that many cards instead."
{3}

I'm trying to shorten up his last ability. Tell me what you think!

Overall interesting. I like that his + ability is pretty weak, but that his -3 ability causes him to be a weak Blightning if you want to get immediate value. The new wording for the emblem is better. You don't need "For the rest of the game" because that is implied by what an emblem is.

"Whenever an opponent would lose life, they lose twice that much life instead. Whenever an opponent would discard one or more cards, they discard twice that many cards instead."

I would cut the damage part, as it is unrelated to the walker and makes the ultimate that much more wordy.

[Tetraman174]

The name is very familar to Ra's al Ghul

[Master Moja]

The name is very familar to Ra's al Ghul

Haha from The Dark Knight? You're right, and I had no idea. It's different enough, though. If I could somehow post my MSE version of the card, I would show everyone. However, I have no idea how to do that, or even if I can. He looks really, really cool.

Anyways, thank you for the fixes and comments!