Ragdrek Bonemarrow

[m.o.x.]

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

Plainswalker-Ragdrek

+1 Add one zombie creature from your deck and put it in your hand then shuffle your deck. Lose 1 life.
+1 Put a +1/+1 on all zombie creatures you control. Lose 2 life
-10 Destroy all non-zombie creatures. You gain 2 life for each creature destroyed this way.


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[deckbuilder]

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

+1 add a zombie from your deck to your hand

+2 all zombies get 1 +1/+1 counter

-10 destroy all non zombie creatures


{1}

Okay, this planeswalker looks kinda cool but it needs some serious editing.
1) Only 1 loyalty is going to die pretty fast...make it at least 4.
2) Also, you should template it so it's easy to read and reword the first and second abilities.
3) And a +1 diabolic tutor in a zombie deck? That's way better than Liliana. Make that -1 or -2.
4) Lastly, +2 for a +1+1 counter is broken. I'd suggest +1.

[RyuumiGaroukuni]

WORDING NEEDS WORK... And pretty much needs Work

1. [1] Starting Loyalty and [6] to cast... You've got to F-in! Kidding me!
2. Too powerful all putting + counters...
3. WTH will I use this...

Ragdrek Bonemarrow
Planeswalker - Ragdrek

[+1] - Search your library for a Zombie card and put it into your hand. Shuffle your library afterwards.

[+2] - Put a +1/+1 counter on all Zombies

[-10] - Destroy all non-Zombie Creatures.
[1]

Too Weak and this person SUCKS!

[Warmaker]

Ryuumi, it seems to me as if you are trying to subvert DraconisMarch's position as the most blunt person on TCGPlayer Forums...

Yes, it needs work. But you don't have to be so ugly about it. Granted, we all have our moments when it's the wrong time of day and we read something and we're just like "No, heck no." I myself have done so (the unfortunate, but thankfully short-lived, incident between me and Guy is an example). Seriously though, I think you're getting a bit carried away. Tone it down a bit, and you just might have reasonable arguments that people would heed.

[Silverdawn Banisher]

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

+1 add a zombie from your deck to your hand

+2 all zombies get 1 +1/+1 counter

-10 destroy all non zombie creatures


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Well, Ryuumi needs to "chillax" a bit. I'll handle this one:

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

Planeswalker - Ragdrek
+1: Search your library for a Zombie card, reveal it, and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library. You lose 2 life.
+2: Put a +1/+1 counter on each Zombie creature you control. You lose 2 life.
-10: Destroy all non-Zombie creatures. You gain 2 life for each creature put into a graveyard this way.
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[Monochrome_Lotus]

Welcome to the Drama Club, m.o.x. Nice screen name, btw.

[keldon]

Well, Ryuumi needs to "chillax" a bit. I'll handle this one:

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

Planeswalker - Ragdrek
+1: Search your library for a Zombie card, reveal it, and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library. You lose 2 life.
+2: Put a +1/+1 counter on each Zombie creature you control. You lose 2 life.
-10: Destroy all non-Zombie creatures. You gain 2 life for each creature put into a graveyard this way.
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I think that life loss is not necessary at that Cc.

[m.o.x.]

i personally like silverdawn banishers form of the card except for the lose 2 life on the +1 ability i think it should be lose one life since it is on the +1 ability and it is going in my hand rather then straight to the battlefield so right now the card is looking like:

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

Planeswalker - Ragdrek
+1: Search your library for a Zombie card, reveal it, and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library.
+1: Put a +1/+1 counter on each Zombie creature you control. You lose 2 life.
-10: Destroy all non-Zombie creatures. You gain 2 life for each creature put into a graveyard this way.
<5>

any more tips you have will be very helpful and thank you

[m.o.x.]

I think that life loss is not necessary at that Cc.

i think the life loss is important because of its ultimate ability in the end your going to get all back anyways

[Monochrome_Lotus]

i personally like silverdawn banishers form of the card except for the lose 2 life on the +1 ability i think it should be lose one life since it is on the +1 ability and it is going in my had rather then straight to the battlefield so right now the card is looking like:

Ragdrek Bonemarrow

Planeswalker - Ragdrek
-1: Search your library for a Zombie card, reveal it, and put it into your hand. Then shuffle your library.
+1: Put a +1/+1 counter on each Zombie creature you control. You lose 2 life.
-10: Destroy all non-Zombie creatures. You gain 2 life for each creature put into a graveyard this way.
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any more tips you have will be very helpful and thank you

Just for reference, m.o.x., usually it's better to edit the original post of your card rather than post the new version.. some of the posters here are kinda lazy and I forget to scroll down. I mean they forget...
I think you should make the first ability +1 again. This PW likes summoning zombies, obviously, it'd make sense flavor-wise to have it get more loyalty for doing so.