Help me!!!!!

[cool blader]

There are 2 people that keep beating me all the time, so obviously there is something wrong with this deck. I am trying to build a Spellcaster/Armored Dragon Lv? (still waitin to get Armored Dragon Lv 7) deck but I dont want to nessaserally build it round my Dark Magician. Please look at my deck and tell me what is wrong.

Monsters
1xLava Golem
1xValkyrion The Magna Warrior
1xBlack Luster Soldier
1xBarrel Dragon
1xSorcerer Of Dark Magic
1xDark Magician
1xDark Magician Girl
1xInsect Princess
1xArmored Dragon Lv5
1xObnoxious Celtic Guard
1xSasuke Samurai #4
1xGravekeeper's Guard
1xGravekeeper's Spear Soldier
1xMorphing Jar #2
1xApprentice Magician
1xMystic Swordsman Lv2
1xMystic Swordsman Lv4
1xMagician Of Faith
1xOld Vindictive Magician
1xSinister Serpent
1xAlpha The Magnet Warrior
1xBeta The Magnet Warrior
1xGamma The Magnet Warrior
1xArmored Dragon Lv3
1xLuster Dragon(1900/1600)
Traps/Magics
1xMagic Cylinder
1xChange Heart
1xHarpie's Feather Duster
1xCovering Fire
1xBack to Square One
1xTrap Hole
1xInsect Barrier
1xFlint
1xNutrient Z
1xHallowed Life Barrier
1xLevel Up!
1xMirror Force
1xMonster Reborn
1xSage's Stone
1xMagic Jammer
1xSeven Tools of the Bandit
1xPineapple Blast
1xDust Tornado
1xRaigeki
1xBlack Luster Ritual
1xDNA Surgery
1xWall of Revealing Light

I have thought about some combos and tell me if they are any good. Armored Dragon Lv7+Light of Intervention. Dark Magician Girl+Sage's Stone then sacrifice DM+DMG for Sorcerer Of Dark Magic. It would be a big help if anyone has any suggestions.;)

[djkates]

First off, the fact that every card in this deck is a single can't be helping. Granted, some of these cards aren't allowed to be more than singles, but even the ones that can be more, aren't. Neither can the fact that your cards don't really come together to form any sort of theme. You want to play Spellcasters? Then any monster in there that isn't a Spellcaster had better have a very good reason to be there.

[SecretSpikeyX]

this is posted in the wrong area, right? maybe a mod'll move it

[SecretSpikeyX]

its harder to create a deck revolving around two themes (in ur case spellcaster/dragon) but you might wanna take out the un-related cards like valkyrion and lava golem. i also see a bit of warrior in there...

[rhomer]

wrong forum I am moving this

[cool blader]

O.k chears for your help and i'll try to make this deck only around those cards, and any more tips will be very helpful.

[envoyman]

oh my god, what is that?
im gonna ask the most obvious question first. Whats you theme?

[envoyman]

1. you need to take out all the crap like the magnet warriors
2. you have to chose if u want speelcaster or armed dragon
3. if you choose armed dragon only have good draon type monster other then staples and if you do spell casters dont put in random crap either

[envoyman]

this is for spellcaster and theese go out :
1xLava Golem
1xValkyrion The Magna Warrior
1xBlack Luster Soldier
1xBarrel Dragon
1xInsect Princess
1xArmored Dragon Lv5
1xObnoxious Celtic Guard
1xSasuke Samurai #4
1xGravekeeper's Guard
1xGravekeeper's Spear Soldier
1xMorphing Jar #2 (optional not a big help for magicain decks
1xMystic Swordsman Lv2
1xMystic Swordsman Lv4
1xAlpha The Magnet Warrior
1xBeta The Magnet Warrior
1xGamma The Magnet Warrior
1xArmored Dragon Lv3
1xLuster Dragon(1900/1600)
1xCovering Fire
1xBack to Square One
1xInsect Barrier (i know your trying to do a combo and i have tried this too but it uh SUCKS
1xFlint
1xNutrient Z
1xHallowed Life Barrier
1xLevel Up!
1xPineapple Blast
1xDust Tornado
1xBlack Luster Ritual
1xDNA Surgery
1xWall of Revealing Light

also what type of magicain deck do you want?
Black magicain of chaos?
Magicain girl?
Paladin?

this is for dark magicain girl deck:
add theese:
3x Skilled Dark Magicain
2x app. Magicain
1x magicain of faith
3x double coston
2x dark magicain
1x dark magicain girl
1x breaker
and thats about all cause you really doont need that many monsters if you deck is done right

[dd warrior man]

armed dragons will not mix well with spellcasters

[Riditation]

I agree with dd on this one

[VOiD_SKiLLZ]

All i can say is wow. Just wow. I want you to save your deck to a text document and then look at it when you have a deck that is not that deck. When i say wow, i do not mean whoa, that deck is good. wow is my substitute for words that would take to long to describe in a kind format useing words that you may understand.
Valkyrion The Magna Warrior Once again.....wow

[Brent]

sounds like you are tryin to incorporate yugi's deck with the dragons roar structure deck