Rate my Darkness Deck

[Duel Champ]

Hi. I'm new here and I'm wanting my deck rated so here it is. MONSTERS:The Masked Beast (Ritual), Zombyra the Dark, Regenerating Mummy, Dark Mimic LV1, Dark Mimic LV3, King of Yamimakai, Magical Marionette, Armored Zombie, Dragon Zombie, Grand Tiki Elder, Red-Eyes B. Chick, Red-Eyes B. Dragon, Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon, A Man With Wdjat, Dark Necrfear, Vamrpire Lord, Patrician of Darkness, Kryuel, Man-Eating Treasure Chest, Mystic Clown, Kiseitai, Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower, Pandemonium Watchbear, Spear Cretin, Des Koala, Summoned Skull, Castle of Dark Illusions, SPELLS:Curse of the Masked Beast, Pot of Greed, Spirit Message I, Spirit Message N, Spirit Message A, Spirit Message L, Mask of the Accursed, Dark Energy, Mystic Plasma Zone (Field spell card), Violet Crystal, Mystical Space Typhoon, Dian Keto the Cure Master, TRAPS:Ultimate Offering, Destiny Board, Call of the Haunted X2, Reinforcements, A Hero Emerges So wat du think?

[GSingh91]

its easier to put ur deck in a list like this:

The masked Beast
Zombyra the Dark etc.

do that and ill help u fix it up

[Duel Champ]

I did try but it came out like that

[GSingh91]

type in ur card name then hit enter and itll go to the next line

[Duel Champ]

kk rytMONSTERS:The Masked Beast (Ritual)Zombyra the DarkRegenerating MummyDark Mimic LV1Dark Mimic LV3 King of YamimakaiMagical MarionetteDragon ZombieGrand Tiki ElderRed-Eyes B. ChickRed-Eyes B. DragonRed-Eyes Darkness DragonA Man With WdjatDark NecrfearVamrpire LordPatrician of DarknessKryuelMan-Eating Treasure ChestMystic ClownKiseitaiSoul-Absorbing Bone TowerPandemonium WatchbearSpear CretinDes KoalaSummoned SkullCastle of Dark IllusionsSPELLS:Curse of the Masked BeastPot of GreedSpirit Message ISpirit Message NSpirit Message ASpirit Message LMask of the AccursedDark EnergyMystic Plasma Zone (Field spell card)Violet CrystalMystical Space TyphoonDian Keto the Cure MasterSecond coin tossTRAPS:Ultimate OfferingDestiny BoardCall of the Haunted X2ReinforcementsA Hero EmergesFairy boxSo wat du think?

[Duel Champ]

Damn it's still not working!! Soz u'll just have 2 read it the way it is am afraid. Soz about the double post

[GSingh91]

its a good deck overall but u have too many high levels. i suggest u take out dark necrofear, patrician of darkness, red eyes black and darkness and ur masked beast. ritual monsters just take up space. also take out one call of the haunted and mystic plasma zone and add in a sakaretsu armor or two. and try to get some axe of despairs or something cuz theyll really help ur deck.

[aznxwater]

here ill hep you arrange it
just copy, paste it to ur signature

[aznxwater]

Darkness Deck
Total Cards: 45

Monsters: 28
Tribute: 8
The Masked Beast (Ritual),
Red-Eyes B. Dragon,
Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon,
Dark Necrfear,
Vamrpire Lord,
Patrician of Darkness,
Summoned Skull,
Castle of Dark Illusions,
Non-Tribute: 20
Zombyra the Dark,
Regenerating Mummy,
Dark Mimic LV1,
Dark Mimic LV3,
King of Yamimakai, (I forget what this is)
Magical Marionette,
Armored Zombie,
Dragon Zombie,
Grand Tiki Elder,
Red-Eyes B. Chick,
A Man With Wdjat,
Kryuel,
Man-Eating Treasure Chest,
Mystic Clown,
Kiseitai,
Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower,
Pandemonium
Watchbear,
Spear Cretin,
Des Koala,

Spells: 12
Curse of the Masked Beast,
Pot of Greed,
Spirit Message I,
Spirit Message N,
Spirit Message A,
Spirit Message L,
Mask of the Accursed,
Dark Energy,
Mystic Plasma Zone (Field spell card),
Violet Crystal,
Mystical Space Typhoon,
Dian Keto the Cure Master,

Trap: 5
Ultimate Offering,
Destiny Board,
Call of the Haunted (you can only have 1)
Reinforcements,
A Hero Emerges

[aznxwater]

okay..ill be honest
very random cards
you should try to focus on a theme besides darkness

i see that alot of ur better cards are fiends..maybie you try to get future cards on fiends.

also..FINAL msg is TOO easy to kill..especially in traditional

and you only haven 1 card that makes it traditional..I think it be easier for you if you take that card out and go to advanced.. or get more traditional cards!! =D. well good luck and keep dueling

[Duel Champ]

Thanks for the advice everyone! I'll try and get some more fiend cards.

[kingdragon]

Seems kinda Random

[Duel Champ]

y does it semm random?