can someone rate my deck please???

[kuro_sama]

monsters
witch of the black forest
total defense shogun
blue eyes white dragon
skilled white magician
marie the fallen one
mine golem*2
gemini elf
the end of anubis
man eater bug
sanga of the thunder
kiseitai
goblin attack force
chainsaw insect
ancient gear beast
buster blader
dark magician *3
acrobat monkey
dark eradicator warlock
kaiser sea horse
ninja grandmaster sasuke
dancing fairy
skilled dark magician
black luster soldier-envoy of teh beginning
jinzo
gagagigo
lava golem
giant orc
ancient gear soldier
chaos emperor dragon
breaker the magical warrior
Traps
exchange of the spirit
cemetary bomb
spell binding circle
magic cylinder
mavelont nuzler
shadow spell
trap jammer
blast held by a tribute
mirror force
dark mirror force
dust tornado *2
enchanted javelin
solemn wishes
a hero emerges
draining shiled
call of the haunted
Spells
dark majic attack
lightning vortex
mage power
pot of greed
swords of revealing light
megamorph
card destruction
tribute to the doom
mystical space typhoon *2
scape goat

suggestions are welcomed. ^^

(total 60)

[lakerzfan27]

put your deck total down to 40-45 then i will help your deck

[Breaker2600]

You have to many cards in you deck do what Lakerzfan27 said size down your deck to 40-45

[dr_nova]

monsters
witch of the black forest
total defense shogun
blue eyes white dragon
skilled white magician
marie the fallen one
mine golem*2
gemini elf
the end of anubis
man eater bug
sanga of the thunder
kiseitai
goblin attack force
chainsaw insect
ancient gear beast
buster blader
dark magician *3
acrobat monkey
dark eradicator warlock
kaiser sea horse
ninja grandmaster sasuke
dancing fairy
skilled dark magician
black luster soldier-envoy of teh beginning
jinzo
gagagigo
lava golem
giant orc
ancient gear soldier
chaos emperor dragon
breaker the magical warrior
Traps
exchange of the spirit
cemetary bomb
spell binding circle
magic cylinder
mavelont nuzler
shadow spell
trap jammer
blast held by a tribute
mirror force
dark mirror force
dust tornado *2
enchanted javelin
solemn wishes
a hero emerges
draining shiled
call of the haunted
Spells
dark majic attack
lightning vortex
mage power
pot of greed
swords of revealing light
megamorph
card destruction
tribute to the doom
mystical space typhoon *2
scape goat

suggestions are welcomed. ^^

(total 60)

Note1: You CAN'T have two mystical space typhoon
Note2: Try to keep it 40 cards
Note3: You have too many traps and monster

- exchange of the spirit
- cemetary bomb
- spell binding circle
- mavelont nuzler
- shadow spell
- trap jammer
- blast held by a tribute
- enchanted javelin
- solemn wishes
- a hero emerges
- draining shiled

+ Torrential tribute
+ Imperial order
+ Ring of destruction


- dark majic attack
- tribute to the doom

+ Dark Hole
+ Raigeki
+ Graceful charity
+ Monster reborn
+ Premature Burial
+ Change of heart
+ Snatch steal
+ Heavy storm
+ Harpie's feather duster


- total defense shogun
- blue eyes white dragon
- marie the fallen one
- the end of anubis
- man eater bug
- sanga of the thunder
- kiseitai
- ancient gear beast
- buster blader
- acrobat monkey(Why?)

AHHHHH...

Forget it for the monsters, i don't know theme you would like, but you already have the two chaos so you could make a chaos deck.:)

I hope it will help you !

[BusterBlader75]

Your deck is really good but as everyone said, make it near 40-45 cards. Make sure Buster Blader is in it!

[TrUe777!]

well from the looks of it... make it 40-45 trust me less time to type it :D and makes it better .. maybe u should start off with naming a theme then we will help u :D

[Necrofear]

as everyone else said, 40-45 is prefered. as it currently is, i give it 1/10

[mattnew]

traditional format is about playing the cards you cannot in advanced. as everyone will agree the best type of trad deck involves chaos in some way whether that is Yata garasu chaos or chaos rush deck. I would go down the road of chaos but remember those important cards for chaos. Painful choice, dimension fusion or return from a different dimension. if you dont want to play chaos then tell us what type of deck you want to build and then we could help you with it.

[Celtic Savior]

You have too many monsters. Get a theme or core card(s) and go with that. If you have the money go to Shuffle&Cut and buy cards to go with your theme.

[Hello?]

Pretty much,

- Less cards
- Make a theme
- try for chaos
- get more banned cards
- RIAGAKI
- Rating=3/10

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- Make new deck

[CdBd]

Well first of all, I can't figure out the theme of the deck. I see a Lava Golem for burn purposes Chaos Emperorer for chaos, alot of beatsticks and way too many traps. You have some pretty good cards in here but I guess your having trouble deciding on a theme. Just disassemble the whole entire deck, pick a theme and then start from there. I dont think anyone can help you with just this big ol' glob of cards put together to form a deck. I personally think you should go with the traditional format chaos deck since you have both chaos monsters. Pick a deck theme first and just start over. Then come back and repost the new deck here. Afterwards everyone will help you create the best deck possible

[GSingh91]

whoa... first of all u have too many high levels; keep it between 3 or 4 i suggest keeping chaos emperor dragon, jinzo, and black luster, fourth being ur choice if u want one.secondly, get more beatdown monsters, and some better spells and traps will help for sure. one last thing: make a theme because ur deck has no strategy.

p.s. add more light and darks for ur chaos monsters and try to get a primal seed