Perfection of my Ultima Aggro deck-Need help!

[Dragonlords]

Right, so the cards in the main deck are:
3 Archfiend Soldier
3 Axe of Despair
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
3 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Call Of The Haunted
1 Cyber-Stein
1 Dark Magician
1 Horn of the Unicorn
3 Luster Dragon #2
1 Mage Power
3 Magic Jammer
2 Marauding Captain
1 Mirror Force
1 Monster Reborn
3 Paladin of White Dragon
1 Raigeki
3 Skilled Dark Magician
1 Snatch Steal
2 Trap Jammer
3 Vorse Raider
3 White Dragon Ritual
1 Polymerization

Also, the cards in the fusion deck are:
1 Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon

[Dragonlords]

If my deck can't be helped, can someone at least rate it.

[TrUe777!]

well it can be helped.. alot.. be no body is fixing it cuz ur gonna make ur deck list more clear

[Dragonlords]

How should I make it clearer?

[pojo]

throw in a harpie feather duster

[AncientGolem]

here's a neatened decklist

3 Archfiend Soldier
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
3 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Cyber-Stein
1 Dark Magician
3 Luster Dragon #2
2 Marauding Captain
3 Paladin of White Dragon
3 Skilled Dark Magician
3 Vorse Raider

3 White Dragon Ritual
1 Polymerization
3 Axe of Despair
1 Horn of the Unicorn
1 Mage Power
1 Monster Reborn
1 Raigeki
1 Snatch Steal

1 Call Of The Haunted
3 Magic Jammer
1 Mirror Force
2 Trap Jammer

Fusion Deck:
1 Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon

[SKR]

take otu that horn of the unicorn it really hurts in a tight game and all of that blue eyes C***

[Dragonlords]

Okay, how about this?

3 Archfiend Soldier
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
1 Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy of the End
1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Cyber-Stein
1 Dark Magician
3 Luster Dragon #2
2 Marauding Captain
1 Paladin of the White Dragon
3 Skilled Dark Magician
3 Vorse Raider

1 White Dragon Ritual
3 Axe of Despair
1 Mage Power
1 Monster Reborn
1 Raigeki
1 Snatch Steal
1 Harpie's Feather Duster

1 Call Of The Haunted
2 Magic Jammer
1 Mirror Force
2 Trap Jammer
2 Seven Tools of the Bandit

Fusion Deck:
1 Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon

[SKR]

why is murading captian in there ditch him and get some light monsters with high atk or chain saw insect or goblin atk froce or giant orc

[Dragonlords]

Okay, I'll try your advice:

3 Archfiend Soldier
1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning
1 Blue-Eyes White Dragon
1 Cyber-Stein
1 Dark Magician
3 Luster Dragon #2
3 Dunames Dark Witch
1 Paladin of the White Dragon
3 Skilled Dark Magician
3 Vorse Raider
3 Goblin Elite Attack Force

1 White Dragon Ritual
3 Axe of Despair
1 Mage Power
1 Monster Reborn
1 Raigeki
1 Snatch Steal
1 Harpie's Feather Duster
1 Premature Burial

1 Call Of The Haunted
2 Magic Jammer
1 Mirror Force
2 Trap Jammer
2 Seven Tools of the Bandit

Fusion Deck:
1 Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon

[the#1TCGPlayer]

- Do you know what Aggro is..
- put in good Self replacing Monsters such as Nimble Momonga, Apprentice Magician, Searchers; etc.

[Unimatrix]

i cant really say any thing about thisd format but it is nice to see diffrent cards other than the bande one dominating your decks!

[Zuo Ci]

Hello Dragon Lords,

So you are a person who supports to the Blue Eyes White Dragon, impressive, An original Blue Eyes card is now hard to find, but its my first holo card from the TCG. Now lets see your deck, dragons, now they are great mythical creatures for battle. First up your Chaos Dragon, Envoy of the End, I like this card, better make sure you have an equality of dark and light monsters in your deck in order to remove 1 dark and light monster from the grave. Im not sure why you need some Vorse Raiders, but if your like Kaiba, thats a great Idea. Paladin of White Dragon is another idea for summoning a Blue Eyes, great job. Goblin Elite Attack Force, unless you are just summoning it for high atk defense, im not sure about this card. Dont use Cyber Stein on your first turn, use its effect only in an emergency. Trap Jammers dont work often in a duel, but keep your Seven Tools of the Bandit, after all destroying a trap at the right time is better. Finally for an advanced duel, put Premature Burial in your deck, after all most duelist put this special summoning card in their decks. Okay I gave you my words, good luck in the dueling world.

From the Words of:
Zuo Ci :D

[Dragonlords]

Gotcha. I'll re-edit my deck (Read 7th post).

P.S: I believe an Aggro deck means a beatdown deck in which monsters with generally high attack attempt to reduce your opponent's life points to 0. A good Aggro deck is one in which the monsters have an average attack of 2000 or above & can still be easily summoned. Also, including a troop of Nimble Momongas would weaken my chance of getting out a BLS-Envoy & Chaos Emperor Dragon.