my deck :O ( I need help )

[Retained]

Reason for editing: Some idiot name fiendmaster or some**** brought it back.

This is my latest / final version of my DM deck.

Advance Format
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2 Dark Magician
1 Dark Magician of Chaos

3 Skilled Dark Magician
2 Apprentice Magician
2 Magician of Faith
2 D. D. Assailant
1 D. D. Warrior Lady
1 Tsukyomi
1 Old Vindictive Magician
1 Breaker The Magical Warrior
1 Sinister Serpent
1 Tribe-Infecting Virus

2 Book of Moon
2 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Smashing Ground
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Heavy Storm
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Scapegoat
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Pot of Greed
1 Graceful Charity
1 Delinquent Duo
1 Dark Magic Attack

2 Sakuretsu Armor
1 Ring of Destruction
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Mirror Force
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Bottomless Trap Hole

Yeah, it's pretty outdated, but meh it kicked *** back then haha.

[XzstratzX]

umm this decks ok obviously u know u need to get a DM girl, apprentice Magician woulndt be bad, 2 more double coston take out injection fairy lilly, trade it, get rid of magic drain for another majic jammer, to decrease majic and trap get riid of Mystical Space Typhoon, Pot of Greed, Graceful, Reload, also for monsters get some more 19 attackers even it ther not spell but mabey like mad dog or sumtin, and another archfiend soldier and u should be okay

[AndrewKismet]

You need to bring this DM deck to 40 cards. Running DM Girl would be a good idea, but don't rely on Sage's Stone too much - I saw a guy with a near-perfect DM Deck draw 3 Sage's Stone in one hand, with no DMG on the field. Card Destruction is a bad draw, change it for Breaker the Magical Warrior. To run DMoC, you might want Dedication through Light and Dark. You'll have to choose one or the other here - DMGirl or DMoC. I'd say DMioC, returning a spell is better than her mediocre boosting effect. Giant Trunade is a smart card, you'll beat Lockdown Burners with that.

[thousand-eyes]

ok obviously u dont need a dark magician girl that card is bad
but the deck isnt bad u just need to get rid of some of those cards like giant orc and maybe the 1900 monsters except skilled dark and u need skilled dark and magician of faith and if u want me to send u my magician deck ill give u it

[dd warrior man]

you need apprentices

[maku]

why doesn't anyone use imprial order.. anyways pretty ood deck

[thousand-eyes]

impereal order is an asowme card im used to advanced im just tryin to post some in here the advice i give u ....... play impereal and if u want me to send u one of my decks i will ive won many local tournaments!

[FiendMasterCVN]

this needs a dark magaican girl