Rate my deck, plz

[Red-eyes]

I´m going to be in a tournament soon. I dont think it will much competion (live in a small city in Sweden) but I want to get my deck rated, so here it is:

1 Armed Dragon LV5
1 Cyber Jar (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=143)
1 Hane-Hane (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=354)
1 La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1453)
2 Luster Dragon #2 (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=461)
1 Man-Eater Bug (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=485)
1 Mask of Darkness (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=492)
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=2140)
1 Opticlops (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=576)
2 Red-Eyes B. Chick (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=2135)
2 Red-Eyes B. Dragon (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=635)
1 Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=2249)
1 Sangan (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=674)
1 Sinister Serpent (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1729)
1 Trap Master (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1420)
1 Witch of the Black Forest (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=880)

1 Change of Heart (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=113)
1 Dark Hole (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=160)
1 Fairy Meteor Crush (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=250)
1 Heavy Storm (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=362)
1 Monster Reborn (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=527)
1 Mystical Space Typhoon (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=549)
1 Nobleman of Crossout (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=561)
1 Pot of Greed (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=604)
1 Premature Burial (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=606)
1 Scapegoat (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1795)
1 Snatch Steal (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=710)
1 Swords of Revealing Light (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=768)

1 Call Of The Haunted (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=99)
1 Covering Fire (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=2244)
1 Curse of Anubis (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=2079)
1 Jar of Greed (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=401)
1 Magic Cylinder (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=467)
1 Magic Jammer (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=469)
1 Ring of Destruction (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1747)
1 Robbin' Goblin (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=653)
1 Waboku (http://www.duelyugioh.com/db/search_result_card.asp?id=1417)

[AndrewKismet]

All I can say is, Red-Eyes Darkness will be a dead draw more often than not. Unless you're running Inferno Fire Blast, a Red-Eyes deck really isn't worth the effort. You need a third Chick and another Red-Eyes to make the strategy successful often enough, and then you need a Mystic Plasma Zone to abuse his Dark type.

[XzstratzX]

I hate to say it but an okay beatdown could probably take this deck out. u should prob get like some more 19 attackers and some equip magics that upp attack and get more red eyes B dragons cuz i know in alot of new fiend decks and stuff they have remove form play cards and if ur red eyes is removed ur f***ed

[AndrewKismet]

Archfiend Soldier is better than La Jinn/Opticlops. Remove Armed Dragon and put in the REBD support cards (Inferno Fire Blast, and the card that gives Dragons Trample.) Also, run Dust Tornado, as you severly lack S/T removal and negation.

[hawkpride2007]

first thing that comes to find is too many tribute monsters. you want to limit the number of tribute monsters to 2 or 3 single tribute monsters, and probably just 1 or 2 two tribute monsters. Second, switch out the monsters with 1800 atk pts for monsters with 1900 atk pts, such as archfiend soldier, gemini elf, and mad dog of darkness. Also, take out sinister serpent, trap master, and curse of anubis. Replace sinister serpent with a fiber jar, and trap master and curse of anubis with 2 magician of faith. Take out ring of destruction and put in a mask of darkness. You want to be able to reuse your call of the haunted and premature burial/monster reborn. Take out jar of greed for another mask of darkness as well. Other than that, this deck seems pretty good. good luck in your tournament!

[thousand-eyes]

ok well first of all i dont like this deck much no offence but i dont think dragon decks ar great in tournies but u play some weird cards for a dragon deck like opticlops if u have ne questions let me no

[FiendMasterCVN]

Pretty good, but why not add in some of the ban cards like Raigeki and Harpies Feather Duster? Also why not try out Blue Eyes White Dragon?