Jinzo_66
12-27-2005, 10:26 PM
<He couldn't believe it, in the very train he sat in was on it's way to 'Battle City' the most famous duel captial of the world! He had wanted to go for so long, but after a local tournament and a powerful deck of cards his dream became reality.>
Takkun- (in shock as he stepped off the train) Wow, im in Battle City!
???- Amazing isn't it?
Takkun- Excuse me, do i know you?
???- Um no, i was just trying to make conversation though, the names, roy.
Takkun- Oh hello, roy. Im Takkun.
Roy- Nice name....Oh i see your wearing a duel disk. Im a duelist too. This town is famous for having so many duelists.
Takkun- Yeah, i know that's why i came here...to prove myself as a duelist and try to become the king of games.
Roy- (laughing out loud) You'd have to beat me to do that. Because i don't know if you know but im a big deal around this town.
Takkun- Really? Cool, i'll start by beating you.
Roy- (continues laughing) Sure. Let's Duel!
<<Both shuffle decks and turn on Duel Disks>>
Takkun- Ok hot shot, i'll start. (Draws) I summon vorse raider in attack mode! And use my spell, swords of revealing light! (3 Green Swords of Light stab into the ground around takkun) and then i'll end.
Roy- Boring...I summon solar flare dragon in attack mode! And activate 'solar wind' it's a powerful spell card.
Solar wind <spell>
-This card can only be activated when a solar flare dragon is face up on the field, destroy a spell or trap card on the field and increase solar flare dragons ATK by 500.
Roy- Good bye swords! Hello Dragon, destroy his vorse raider! solar flare beam! (vorse raider melts under the unbearable fire blast)
Takkun: 3900
Roy: 4000
Roy- I end, and my dragon does 500 points of damage to you.
Takkun: 3400
Roy: 4000
Takkun- Not bad (laughs) i have nothing on the field! (draws) sweet! it's over now. you'd have to be pretty dumb to just go ahead and play a solar flare dragon open like that with no face down cards. Oh, well i'll take advantage of it!
I summon Kai Koa in attack mode!
Kai Koa <4 stars/Light/Fairy/ATK 1600, DEF 1200>
Effect- when this card attacks or is attacked you can return it to your hand at the cost of 1200 life points.
Takkun- Attack! (A goblin runs over and smashs the dragon with a hammer) and that'll do for now...
Roy- Take your own advice(draw) cause now i activate 'From the Ashes'
From the Ashes<spell>
-when a solar dragon is in your grave yard you can activate this card. summon the solar flare dragon and as many other solar flare dragons from you deck as possiable and destroy an oppenents monster with 4 stars or lower.
Roy- It's almost over now. (3 dragons fly out a flame onto the field) (laughing) and i destroy your kai koa and activate another card 'Wildfie'
Wildfire<spell>
This card can only be activated when you have a fire type monster face up on the field, inflict 1000 points of damage to your oppnent.
Takkun: 2400
Roy: 4000
Roy- It's a little disapointing, i was thinking you'd do better! I end and with 3 dragons you take 1500 points of damage. (3 dragons send heat waves at takkun)
Takkun: 900
Roy: 4000
Takkun- (Draws) Perfect! I activate dian kito the dure master to heal my life points by 1000!
Takkun: 1900
Roy: 2200
Roy- Big deal you'll just lose on my turn.
Takkun- Im not finnished! I summon Ced- envoy of the end! by removing from play a light monster and a dark monster! (ced flys onto the field and roars) And my dragons effect is if i pay 1000 points i destroy everything on the field and you take 300 points for each card!
Roy- Ho....howw....d....did some....one like you ge.....t that ca....card?
Takkun -Then attack your lifepoints for 3000 and then i win! (the dragon shoots a beam as red as blood at roy)
Roy- (In shock) You won, wow i haven't lost in a long time.
Takkun: 900
Roy: 0000
<<A man in a black over coat walks over>>
???- Excuse me...i watched you duel and i wanted to give you this. (he hands takkun an envlope) goodbye...(he walks into the crowd)
Takkun- That's odd...Who was that guy?
Roy- Congrates! Open the letter.
(Takkun opens the letter and begins reading)
Takkun- Oh my gosh! It's an invitation to compete in a tounament! Not just any tournament, one held by seto kiaba!
Roy- (Laughing) So you got one to then?
Im in the tournament to.
Takkun- This is so cool! I can't wait! It starts in a week. (takkun looks over to smile at roy but to his amazment he's gone)
yeah, that's all i have for now, don't know when episode 2 will be writen but it's already been though up of so it won't be long. So this is my first story how did i do what do i need help fixing? your the readers whats your opnion?
Takkun- (in shock as he stepped off the train) Wow, im in Battle City!
???- Amazing isn't it?
Takkun- Excuse me, do i know you?
???- Um no, i was just trying to make conversation though, the names, roy.
Takkun- Oh hello, roy. Im Takkun.
Roy- Nice name....Oh i see your wearing a duel disk. Im a duelist too. This town is famous for having so many duelists.
Takkun- Yeah, i know that's why i came here...to prove myself as a duelist and try to become the king of games.
Roy- (laughing out loud) You'd have to beat me to do that. Because i don't know if you know but im a big deal around this town.
Takkun- Really? Cool, i'll start by beating you.
Roy- (continues laughing) Sure. Let's Duel!
<<Both shuffle decks and turn on Duel Disks>>
Takkun- Ok hot shot, i'll start. (Draws) I summon vorse raider in attack mode! And use my spell, swords of revealing light! (3 Green Swords of Light stab into the ground around takkun) and then i'll end.
Roy- Boring...I summon solar flare dragon in attack mode! And activate 'solar wind' it's a powerful spell card.
Solar wind <spell>
-This card can only be activated when a solar flare dragon is face up on the field, destroy a spell or trap card on the field and increase solar flare dragons ATK by 500.
Roy- Good bye swords! Hello Dragon, destroy his vorse raider! solar flare beam! (vorse raider melts under the unbearable fire blast)
Takkun: 3900
Roy: 4000
Roy- I end, and my dragon does 500 points of damage to you.
Takkun: 3400
Roy: 4000
Takkun- Not bad (laughs) i have nothing on the field! (draws) sweet! it's over now. you'd have to be pretty dumb to just go ahead and play a solar flare dragon open like that with no face down cards. Oh, well i'll take advantage of it!
I summon Kai Koa in attack mode!
Kai Koa <4 stars/Light/Fairy/ATK 1600, DEF 1200>
Effect- when this card attacks or is attacked you can return it to your hand at the cost of 1200 life points.
Takkun- Attack! (A goblin runs over and smashs the dragon with a hammer) and that'll do for now...
Roy- Take your own advice(draw) cause now i activate 'From the Ashes'
From the Ashes<spell>
-when a solar dragon is in your grave yard you can activate this card. summon the solar flare dragon and as many other solar flare dragons from you deck as possiable and destroy an oppenents monster with 4 stars or lower.
Roy- It's almost over now. (3 dragons fly out a flame onto the field) (laughing) and i destroy your kai koa and activate another card 'Wildfie'
Wildfire<spell>
This card can only be activated when you have a fire type monster face up on the field, inflict 1000 points of damage to your oppnent.
Takkun: 2400
Roy: 4000
Roy- It's a little disapointing, i was thinking you'd do better! I end and with 3 dragons you take 1500 points of damage. (3 dragons send heat waves at takkun)
Takkun: 900
Roy: 4000
Takkun- (Draws) Perfect! I activate dian kito the dure master to heal my life points by 1000!
Takkun: 1900
Roy: 2200
Roy- Big deal you'll just lose on my turn.
Takkun- Im not finnished! I summon Ced- envoy of the end! by removing from play a light monster and a dark monster! (ced flys onto the field and roars) And my dragons effect is if i pay 1000 points i destroy everything on the field and you take 300 points for each card!
Roy- Ho....howw....d....did some....one like you ge.....t that ca....card?
Takkun -Then attack your lifepoints for 3000 and then i win! (the dragon shoots a beam as red as blood at roy)
Roy- (In shock) You won, wow i haven't lost in a long time.
Takkun: 900
Roy: 0000
<<A man in a black over coat walks over>>
???- Excuse me...i watched you duel and i wanted to give you this. (he hands takkun an envlope) goodbye...(he walks into the crowd)
Takkun- That's odd...Who was that guy?
Roy- Congrates! Open the letter.
(Takkun opens the letter and begins reading)
Takkun- Oh my gosh! It's an invitation to compete in a tounament! Not just any tournament, one held by seto kiaba!
Roy- (Laughing) So you got one to then?
Im in the tournament to.
Takkun- This is so cool! I can't wait! It starts in a week. (takkun looks over to smile at roy but to his amazment he's gone)
yeah, that's all i have for now, don't know when episode 2 will be writen but it's already been though up of so it won't be long. So this is my first story how did i do what do i need help fixing? your the readers whats your opnion?