B/U mill help

[VortexFamiliar]

Im trying to put together a :b:/:u: mill deck. What i want to put in the deck are something along these lines:

*8 creatures*
2 Jace Beleren
2 Liliana Vess
4 Liliana's Specter

*28 spells*
4 Liliana's Caress
4 Mind Rot
4 Jace's Erasure
4 Preordain
4 Tome Scour
4 Traumatize
4 Sign in Blood

*24 lands*
4 Bojuka Bog
2 Mystifying Maze
2 Drowned Catacomb
4 Halimar Depths
6 Island
6 Swamp

any help will be greatly appreciated. I do not have Archive Trap, or Jace, The Mind Sculptor
:confused:
Im working on an idea that while milling opponents deck, I can also take away hit points from discard.

[Dragamaloon]

I'm running something very similar right now, and it looks like the only thing I can recommend if you want to have a chance of beating them with hit points as well as milling them, add Bloodchief Ascension.

[UrzaSon]

Bloodchief Ascension (http://magic.tcgplayer.com/db/magic_single_card.asp?cn=Bloodchief Ascension) is pretty awesome if you can get it online quick. Turns your tome scours into 20 point life swings. Came up with a rough Grixis varient before Scars came out was something like this:

4 Bloodchief Ascension (http://magic.tcgplayer.com/db/magic_single_card.asp?cn=Bloodchief Ascension)
4 Staggershock
3 Punishing Fire
4 Call to Mind
4 Tome Scour
3 Lillana Vess

4 Hedron Crab
2 Mnemonic Wall
3 Guul Draz Specter
3 Reanimating Skeleton

4 Scalding Tarn
3 Drowned Catacombs
2 Dragon Skull Sumit
1 Lava Claw Reaches
4 Moutains
6 Inslands
6 Swamps

That's not quite right though....thought I had a couple more ways to push damage threw. Oh well, you get the idea.

Also as a side note, IMO B/U Mill not viable as even a 3rd tier. Maybe Voltaic Key/Grindstone/Keening Stone/Training Grounds/?

[VortexFamiliar]

Also as a side note, IMO B/U Mill not viable as even a 3rd tier. Maybe Voltaic Key/Grindstone/Keening Stone/Training Grounds/?

I like the idea of those actually. il def keep that in mind. thanks