Help me fix this deck?

[atenzor]

NOTE: If not in good section, please move it! Thanks!

Hi, I never lost with my following deck so far, but I do want to
improve it more. Help me out if possible. Thanks!

Deck: 40 cards

Monsters: 16

1x Newdoria
1x 4-starred ladybug of doom
1x Vorse Raider
1x Skilled Dark Magician
1x Jinzo
1x Marshmallon
1x Swarm of scarabs
2x Goblin Attack Force
1x Drillago
1x Blade Knight
1x Cyber Jar
1x Spear Dragon
1x Breaker, the magical warrior
1x Penguin soldier
1x Swarm of locusts

Spells: 13

1x Graceful charity
1x Swords of revealing light
1x Monster Reborn
1x Pot of Greed
1x Change of Heart
1x Dark Hole
1x Mystic Box
1x Mystical space typhoon
1x Raigeki
1x Harpie's feather duster
1x Heavy storm
1x Giant trunade
1x Scapegoat

Traps: 11

3x Dust tornado
1x Mirror Force
1x Trap Hole
1x Magic Cylinder
1x Scrap-Iron scarecrow
1x Michizure
1x Bottomless trap hole
1x Torrential tribute
1x Spellbinding circle

Well? What needs to be fixed?
Thanks!

-Atenzor-

[ss4chris]

Is your deck beatdown? If so you can take out the peguin soldier and swarm of locusts and add more beatdown.

You have too many traps and spells. Lineup should be more balanced.

[atenzor]

Is your deck beatdown? If so you can take out the peguin soldier and swarm of locusts and add more beatdown.

You have too many traps and spells. Lineup should be more balanced.

Yes, it is Beatdown. Can you suggest me some cards to add and what
spells/traps to change/keep/remove? Also, can you help me with a more
balanced lineup. Thanks!

[ss4chris]

ok well you could run beatdown monarchs.

Run level 4 monsters with great attack, like vorse raider, gemini elf, gene teched wolf, etc.

Then run 2-3 soul exchange and 5-7 monarchs.

[atenzor]

ok well you could run beatdown monarchs.

Run level 4 monsters with great attack, like vorse raider, gemini elf, gene teched wolf, etc.

Then run 2-3 soul exchange and 5-7 monarchs.

Hmm, yes this is good. I have most of the monarchs and I will try and
do what you said and test it out. Thanks a lot man!

[ss4chris]

you're welcome. Let me know how the deck goes. I'm happy to help. ^__^

[Thunderer]

Ladybug is too situational to use. Jinzo is a bad fit with 11 traps. Either lose the Jinzo or add another one and drop the traps to less than 5. Ss4chris has some good advice too, Monarchs would do well in here if you wanted to go that route. Gene Warped Warwolf is good at 3 for your deck.

[jmacshort]

add more level 4's with 1900 attacks or higher, gemini elf, goblin elite attack force. also add exiled force and sasuki samauri, and summoned skull. only have 1 monster over a level 6 and that is tyrant dragon. and definately have a few negate attcks just to save your but. the point of having mostly level 4 monsters with good effects in a beatdown deck is to always ensure that you have a monster on the field. at least half of your deck should consist of monster cards to do this. this will allow you to just pounce on an opponent while they try to get their strategy in order. beatdown almost always prevails because you have the easiest strategy in the game "just kick ***" its effective and doesn't take a lot of planning and combos to work, just a few simple plans and smart cards, you never have to worry about the luck of the draw. also get rid of swords, mystc box, giant trunade and scape goat, for united we stand, mage power, and two axes of despair. powerups are a must in beatdown decks. and only 8 traps, get rid of bottomless trap hole, scrap-iron scarecrow, Michizure, and spellbindign circle they are crap for beatdown, add 2 negate attack, imperial order, caesefire, and barrel behine the door and ring of destruction for 2 of the dust tornados, hope this helps i have quite a few beatdown decks one of whihc i haven't lost with yet in over 500 matches

[Reno]

If you have GX Tag Force, Bastion has a very good example of a Normal Monster Beatdown Deck. All of his Monsters are 1900 level 4 attackers, and Magnet Warriors. He also has Heart of the Underdog, and all hos Traps are to protect his Monsters, such as Magic Cylinder and Sakuretsi Armor. Or, as my brother put it, "the b****rd cards." :D Very simple but very fun.

And, like the above guy said, equip Spells are important too.

if you're going for the Monarch Beatdown, you might want to throw in a Cyber Dragon for an easy Tribute Summon.

[ツEpic]

Ewww Blade Warrior and Vorse Raider

-Blade Warrior
-Vorse Raider

Add 2 Plaugespreaders

[prosaic]

Plaguespreader Zombie is a limited card, please don't post if you don't know what you're saying....

Spamming the 1st 100 posts isn't really worth it...

[Omnipotent]

Ugh..Normal, Traditional beatdown?

Why not run a skill drain beatdown..

Y'know Chainsaw Insects, Skill Drain..I mean, you can run the Witch of the black forest right? Boom, to your hand I suppose..

It'd be like, five dollars more expensive to run, but better all in all..

If playing monarchs, you definately want 2-3 soul exchange, keep them traditional lineup for monarchs,

+ 3 Caius
+ 2 Raiza(still semi right?)
+ 1 Mobius

Maybe, you could give yourself a higher impact trap lineup instead of a bunch of stuff thrown in there..

[Reno]

Ewww Blade Warrior and Vorse Raider

-Blade Warrior
-Vorse Raider

Add 2 Plaugespreaders

No, Vorse Raider's vital in a Normal beat down.