my beatdown deck what do you think

[jmacshort]

2 Jinzo
1 Summonded Skull
1 Magician of Faith
2 Maraunding Captain
1 Cyber Jar
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
2 Gemini Elf
1 Vorse Raider
1 Goblin Elite Attack Force
2 Goblin Attack Force
1 Slate Warrior
1 Sasuke Samari
1 Exiled Force
1 Tribe Infecting Virus
1 Hyabusa Knight
1 Injection Fairy Lily
1 Sangan
1 Witch of the Black Forest
1 Spirt Reaper

1 Raigeki
1 Monster Reborn
1 Change of Heart
1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Axe of Despair
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 United We Stand
1 Mage Power
1 Harpie's Feather Duster
1 Graceful Charity
1 Pot of Greed
1 Dark Hole

1 Magical Cylinder
1 Mirror Force
1 Imperial Order
1 Call of the Haunted
2 Negate Attack
1 Ceasefire
1 Torrential Tribute

[Dream3rrr]

This Is Pretty good deck. However you need to straighten out a few things. a beatdown deck has a variety of posibilities i think you shud pick a certain attribute then work around. but any way, it has great possibilities. GREAT JOB.

[jmacshort]

well i wouldn't really structure a beatdown deck around an attribute, the point of a beatdown deck is to destroy your opponant fast. this deck allows you to win quickly and in devstating fassion. i have been using this deck for years and won well over 500 tournament matches with it. i can't tell you how many times i have hit an opponant for 5000+ lifepoints in just 1 turn. this deck i so strong that i have one numerous time on my second turn if i get out my cyber jar on turn one. the deck has the availability to destory anything, the only reason you would worry about have cardsa with the same attributes would be if you were running an attribute stragegy deck. i am not running magic or trap cards that apply to my specific monsters or attributes. all of these cards in this deck are arranged to destroy opponants and fast. i challenge you to build this deck and duel, and tell me that this isn't one of teh smoothest decks you ever played with.

[DragonBane]

-Change of Heart
-Torrential Tribute
-Spirit Reaper
+ 2 Axe of Despairs OR Malevolent Nuzzler
+ Maha Vailo (Powerhitter with equips)

[jmacshort]

i feel that you should always have a spirit reaper in a beatdown deck, sometime you have a hard time drawing monsters in a beatdown because you have so many power up spell cards, the spirit reaper gives you that defense that you need to get your other monsters out when your in a jam, change of heart is a staple card and shoudl be in any beatdown deck. this is a major way to get out your high level monsters without having to tribute one of your own. i keep the torrential tribute in the deck just in case my cyber jars effect backfires on me, if i don't get any monsters to summon on the 5 card draw and my opponant does i can destoy all of his monsters on the field, and set myself up for a possible graveyard return of one of my monsters for a direct attack. my phiulosophy on axe od despair is it is only good for a hayabusa knight in a beatdown deck. giving the busa 2000 attack and a double attack is great but i only carry one busa so only need one axe, plus i can bring it back to my deck once if it is destoyed so it is like having two in my deck, and i really don't mind giving up the 1000 life points because i usually don't lose duels with this deck, but rarely do i even use teh second effect of the axe. and i won't even get into what a waste of paper the menevolant nuzzler is. maha vailo is a good choice, but only works if you can pull you equip spell cards out with it, if not it really is a useless level 4 monster.

[kejimasters]

add a tyrant dragon in igornes traps and has a preety good attk points