How is my fiend deck?

[Carnage]

High Levels
Raviel, Lord of Phantasms x1
Invader of Darkness x1
Dark Necrofear x2
Great Maju Garzette x1
Legendary Fiend x1
Dark Ruler Ha Des x1
Helpoemer x1
Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1

Low Levels
Archfiend Soldier x1
La Jinn X1
Sangan x1
Kuriboh x1
Marshmallon x1
Dark Jeroid x1
Giant Germ x2
Emissary Of The Afterlife x1
Grave Protector x1
Exiled Force x1
Gemini Impsx1
Kiseitai x1
Time Wizard x1
Newdoria x1

Magic Cards
Mystic Plasma Zone x1
Black Pendant x1
Marshmallon Glasses x1
Shield Crush x1
Heavy Storm x1
Monster Reborn x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Beginning of The End x1
Mist Body x1
Swords of Revealing Light x1

Traps
Magic Jammer x1
Trap Jammer x1
Metal Morph x1
Judgment of Anubis x1
Magic Cylinder x1
Negate Attack x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Hate Buster x2
Mirror Force x1


Not that it matters, but for every card in my deck that can be gotten in a starter / structure deck as a common card I have the Rare/S Rare/ U Rare/ Sec Rare versions of those. What should I get rid of and what should I replace with?

[Carnage]

Replace La Jinn with Opticlops, more def same attack plus its rare and still a fiend.
Add Winged Minion to the deck as well

[RyoAzuro]

Well your deck needs help and I'm going to fix it based on trying to get high level monsters out.

Monsters [19]
3 Archfiend Soldier
3 Giant Germ
3 Slate Warrior
2 Giant Orc
2 Caius the Shadow Monarch
2 Dark Necrofear
1 Raviel
1 Snipe Hunter
1 Sangan
1 Wall of Illusion

Spells [15]
3 Book of Moon
2 Fires of Doomsday
2 Allure of Darkness
1 Smashing Ground
1 Lightning Vortex
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Heavy Storm
1 Monster Reborn
1 Brain Control
1 Giant Trunade
1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps [6]
2 Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
2 Threatening Roar
1 Mirror Force
1 Torrential Tribute

This should allow speed and power. Hopefully this works as your deck needs a lot of work as is, so I tried to give a generic outline of a advanced deck for you to try since it seems you made changes from the previous post to comply with Advanced cards.

- Ryo

[biggp1]

my deck just something to go off of

Monsters: 26

2x Archfiend Soldier
1x Slate(I know i need 2more will swap out archfiend)
2x Goblin Elite Attack Force(i know i need 1 more)
3x giant germ
1x dark ruler Ha Des
2x Dark Necrofear
1x Night assailant
1x Caius the Shadow Monarch
1x exiled Force
1x Magician of faith
1x Sangan
1x Tsukuyomi
1x Mask of darkness
1x Mobius
1x Prometheus lord of shadows
1x Giant orc(will swap out as soon i get another elite)
1x Cyber Jar
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Tribe-infecting Virus
1x Newdoria
1x Raviel, Lord of Phantasms

Spells :18
1x forceful sentry
1x deliquit duel
1x Heavy Storm
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Pot of Avarice
1x Premature Burial
1x Lightning Vortex
1x Harpi's Feather Duster
1x United we stand
1x Book of moon
1x Pot of greed
1x Snatch Steal
1x smashing ground
1x Nobleman of crossout
1x Graceful Charity
1x Brain Control
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x riageki

Traps: 6
1x Mirror Force
1x Bottomless Traphole
1x Magic cylinder
1x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Call of the Haunted

might want to reduce to 40 or 45

[jmacshort]

not bad, you might want to put in a Summoned Skull or two. although he has no effect it is a high powered monster that only needs 1 tribute. i would also remove two level 4 non effect monsters and add two more archfiend soldiers. having 1900 attack points will really help as there aren't many level 4 monsters with higher attacks that don't have an effect cost to summon or attck. i would also add a necrovalley. most players won't use field magic cards, but the good thing is is that now having Mystical space typhoon limited to one/deck, most players won't waste it on a field magic card, so if you can pull it early there is a good chance that it will stay on the field throughout the duel. i wouls also remove any non-fiend type monsters. it's not much of a theme deck if you stray away from your theme.

[Carnage]

High Levels (10)
Raviel, Lord of Phantasms x1
Invader of Darkness x1
Dark Necrofear x3
Great Maju Garzette x1
Belial - Marquis of Darkness x1
Dark Ruler Ha Des x1
Helpoemer x1
Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1

Low Levels (20)
Archfiend Soldier x3
Slate Warrior X3
Sangan x1
Kuriboh x1
Marshmallon x1
Dark Jeroid x1
Giant Germ x2
Emissary Of The Afterlife x1
Grave Squirmer x1
Kiseitai x1
Time Wizard x1
Newdoria x1
Winged Minion x1
Prometheus x1
Shadowslayer x1

Magic Cards
Mystic Plasma Zone x1
Black Pendant x1
Marshmallon Glasses x1
Shield Crush x1
Heavy Storm x1
Monster Reborn x1
Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Beginning of The End x1
Mist Body x1
Swords of Revealing Light x1

Traps
Magic Jammer x1
Trap Jammer x1
Metal Morph x1
Judgment of Anubis x1
Magic Cylinder x1
Negate Attack x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Hate Buster x2
Mirror Force x1

My Deck Redone


and btw this is not an advanced deck im trying to make, this is a casual deck for friend to duel against

[Carnage]

what else would be good additions to this deck?

[DragonBane]

Replace MYstical Space Typhoon for Dust Tornado, much better card, and you can have 3 of them.

[Carnage]

yea, good idea on Dust Tornado, thanks

[Fidamania]

I'd keep the MST if I were you. You don't have to set it for a turn. Maybe run one or two Dust Tornados (if you can slip them in). But don't put DT in MST's place.