wanting help improving on this deck

[bobalisk]

right i have changed this deck round LOADS now and i think im coming up to the final finished product now :-D comments will be greatly appreciated

Extra deck is now this:
red dragon archfiend
stardust dragon x2
black rose dragon
gaia knight, the force of earth
junk warrior x2

level 5's and higher:
cyber dragon
prime material dragon
zaborg the thunder monarch
stardust dragon/assault mode
vampire lord

level 4's and lower:
kuriboh
dandylion
goblin attack force
assault mercenary x2
goblin elite attack force
marshmallon
giant germ x3
debris dragon
d.d warrior lady
junk synchron x2
neo spacian grand mole
slate warrior x2
twin headed behemoth
krebons
mad archfiend
tune warrior
winged kuriboh

magic:
scape goat
monster reborn
brain control
pot of avarice
card trader
heavy storm
lighting vortex
swords of revealing light
assault teleport
card destruction
foolish burial

traps:
dark bribe
assault mode activate
divine wrath x2
scrap-iron scarecrow
ceasefire
imperial iron wall (this is here because im sick of stardust and sd/asault being removed from play, my friends use remove from plays just to remove him now :@ )
compulsory evacuation device x2
dark mirror force
mirror force
seven tools of the bandit
ring of destruction (only one banned card woot! lol)


moved away from the dragon theme mostly other than the synchro's what you all think? this coming along well? thinking of adding thought ruler archfiend to the extra deck if i can get my hands on one. and also want to find a way to get urgent tune in this.

[hokira]

Uhm, some cards don't go together. This looks like a mixed deck with a tiny bit of theme. There are some cards that will give you dead draws. Try to add cards that will really help you in most situations, in this case 'under pressure'.

Since this is a .. half-synchro deck, I suggest adding more tuner cards or maybe 2 or 3 Double Summons.

[bobalisk]

yeah see i originally thought about having double summon, but i dunno, i do have some magna drago's i could use but i found in the past they get destroyed far too easily, ill admit things like twin sword marauder is a random selection for the deck but i thought abit of piercing double attack wouldnt hurt. what would you recommend taking out/replacing and with what? generally, other than a limited supply of sychro's its not difficult for me to get ahold of certain cards.

[hokira]

Try making your deck 40 cards max.

Maybe;
- Twin sword Marauder
- Monster Reincarnation
- 2 Quilbolt Hedgehog
- Any card.

+ 3 Gravekeeper Spys
+ 2 Double Summons

Gravekeeper Spys are very handy due to their flip effect. Just use it as defence and synchro. It is 4 stars and very helpful.

Double summon is there for obvious reasons.

[bobalisk]

hmmm, never really thought of using gravekeepers spy, tbh im not overly fond of the idea, wouldnt something like peten the dark clown or masked dragon work to the same ability? im just thinking masked dragon could get one more use out of himself as i have eploder dragon in there.

[jmacshort]

1st you need to decide whether this is going to be a syncho or dragon deck, you can't have both, if you want to keep the syncho deck theme then change out some of your dragons for tuner monstersn and a couple of speed warriors. also think about adding so assault modes for you syncho monsters and some traps to bing them out. if your going to go dragon, whihc is where i would go with this deck, i would add spear dragon, rare meatal dragon, bohemouth dragon, luster dragon#2, Lord of D, flute of the summoning dragon, a couple of DNA surgery, and either decide to go red eyes or blue eyes, that will depend on the rest of the cards. for red eyes, i would go metal morph, red eyes metal dragon, red eyes black chick, red eyes wyvern and red eyes zombie dragon. for blue eyes: paladin of white dragon, white dragon ritual, bust beam attack, of course 1-3 blue eyes, and forget about ultimate blue eyes and blue eyes shining dragon, they take too long to get out and cause you to need too big of a deck

[bobalisk]

right, well ive done some revisions, ive actually moved away from the idea of dragon and sychro, this is what ive come up with so far:

Extra deck:
stardust dragon x2
black rose dragon
gaia knight, force of earth x2
junk warrior

Main deck:

lvl 5+:
stardust dragon/assault mode
zaborg the thunder monarch
cyber dragon
guardian sphinx

lvl 4-:
assault mercenary
neddle worm x2
junk sychron
assault beast
giant germ x3
morphing jar
mad archfiend
dandylion
tune warrior
neo-spacian grand mole (such a god send of a monster lol)
slate warrior
krebons
goblin elite attack force

Magic:
raigeki
magical mallet
monster reborn
pot of averice
card destruction
lightning vortex
change of heart
gravekeepers servent
heavy storm
card trader (put the assault back in my deck more times than i can count)
premature burial

Traps:
compulsory evacuation device
magic cylinder
dark bribe x2
call of the haunted
assault mode activate
mirror force
scrap-iron scarecrow
trap jammer
ring of destruction
sakuretsu armor

been tested in 3 duels so far and has won 2 out of 3. only reason for its first loss was i got decked by neddle worm....grrrr lol

any thoughts or suggestions? personally id like to run both my stardust/assault and red dragon/assault but i cant seem to get a good balance for the deck for it too work right.

[kejimasters]

maybe u could take out zarborg out for redarchfiend dragon /assult mode apart from that cant see anything wrong with it.

[bobalisk]

maybe u could take out zarborg out for redarchfiend dragon /assult mode apart from that cant see anything wrong with it.


yeah, see i think id rather switch guardian sphinx for my assault mode as zaborg comes in all too handy. if you were going to use this deck what you take out/change around?