Need any help with this deck

[Hockeypunk138]

this deck isn't very good i will appreciate any help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Monsters:
chaosrider gustaph
samara kaiser
kycoo the ghost destroyer
dd survivor X2
dd warrior lady
caius the shadow monarch
bazoo the soul eater X2
golden homuniculus
dimensional alchemist
giant rat
gren maju da elza
dd assailant
dd warrior
giant soldier of stone
dd scout plane
exiled force
ddm different dimesion master
battle ox
phantom of chaos
zure knight of dark world


Magic
brain control
gryphons feather duster
pot of greed
enemy controller
reinforcement of the army
megamorph
soul release
monster reborn
mystical space typhoon
lightning vortex
heavy storm
graceful chairity
dark hole
premature burial
change of heart


Traps
sakuretsu armour
torrential tribute
dd dynamite
bottomless trap hole
staunch defender
karma cut

[Tentensbeastly]

Ummmmmmm, where's the deck?

[Hockeypunk138]

come on anyone

[Hockeypunk138]

please somone help

[Hockeypunk138]

please help

[LilGuru]

i would love to help but what is this deck based around? also a couple of these cards are ban like change of heart and dark hole so go over the cards and make sure they are not ban. another couple things are why run a battle ox when you could run some other 1900 atk monster? if your deck is a ramove from play deck why are you running so many staples?

[MakingDecksOutOfNothing]

this deck isn't very good i will appreciate any help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Monsters:
chaosrider gustaph
samara kaiser
kycoo the ghost destroyer
dd survivor X2
dd warrior lady
caius the shadow monarch
bazoo the soul eater X2
golden homuniculus
dimensional alchemist
giant rat
gren maju da elza
dd assailant
dd warrior
giant soldier of stone
dd scout plane
exiled force
ddm different dimesion master
battle ox
phantom of chaos
zure knight of dark world


Magic
brain control
gryphons feather duster
pot of greed
enemy controller
reinforcement of the army
megamorph
soul release
monster reborn
mystical space typhoon
lightning vortex
heavy storm
graceful chairity
dark hole
premature burial
change of heart


Traps
sakuretsu armour
torrential tribute
dd dynamite
bottomless trap hole
staunch defender
karma cut


wow... this will take a lot of fix up
let us begin:
monsters
u have:21
- chaosrider gustaph (not worth it)
- samara kaiser (why?????)
kycoo the ghost destroyer..... keep
+3 banisher of the light (gets cards into the graveyard)
x1 dd survivor (minus one)
+1 D.D. scout plane
X2 dd warrior lady (add one)
x2 caius the shadow monarch (add one)
X2 bazoo the soul eater
golden homuniculus (keep)
x2 dimensional alchemist (add one)
giant rat -1 (for what????)
x2 gren maju da elza (add one)
x2 dd assailant(add one)
x2 dd warrior (add one)
-1 giant soldier of stone (banisher od the light is a good replacement)
dd scout plane (i added one above)
exiled force -1 (why???)
x2 ddm different dimesion master (add one)
battle ox (-1... what is it for???)
phantom of chaos
zure knight of dark world (-1 what is it for?)

this leaves you with 25 monsters, cut down 5 that you pick
1 kycoo the ghost destroyer
3 banisher of the light
1 DD survivor
2 DD scout plane
2 caius
2 dd warrior lady
2 bazoo the soul eater
1 golden homunculus
2 dimensional alchemist
2 gren maju da elza
2 dd assailant
2 dd warrior
2 different dimmension master
1 phantom of chaos

i cant help on magic and trap it will wake me too long, ill try tommorow
add 3 macro cosmos

[LilGuru]

also why are you running gryphons feather duster.

[MakingDecksOutOfNothing]

here are your magic cards:
brain control
- gryphons feather duster
pot of greed
enemy controller
X2 reinforcement of the army (add one)
- megamorph
- soul release
+3 soul absorption
- monster reborn (all your card are removed from play!!!!)
mystical space typhoon
x2 lightning vortex (add one)
heavy storm
graceful charity
dark hole
-premature burial (again, no card in graveyard)
change of heart
+ mage power
+card destruction
+3 chaos end

that leaves you with 21 magic
now trap

-sakuretsu armour
+mirror force (if you dont have, then threatening roar)
torrential tribute
x3 dd dynamite
-1 bottomless trap hole (they are going into be removed from play anyway
-1 staunch defender
karma cut

5 trap...
a total of 51 cards... you should cut it down, and maybe have three gren maju's.... butyour better....

[LilGuru]

hello? this deck is not changing and it is so random

[LilGuru]

ya it is pretty random.