new deck need help

[ayuto56]

I have tryed to make this deck a remove from play setup but im low on cards that i can think of to use

Monsters: 21

exiled force
mask of darkness
dark blade
obnoxious celtic guard
snipe hunter
marauding captain
princess of tsurugi
dark crusader
frostosaurus
sangan
vemon cobra
vemon serpent
armor breaker
gilasaurus
evil hero infernal sniper
gren maju da eiza
armageddon knight
hiro's shadow scout
dimension
nanobreaker
destiny hero - dasher

Spells: 12

big bang shot x2
dark hole
lightning vortex
mystical space typhoon
mesmeric control
nobleman of crossout
earthquake
black pendant
fissure
dimensionhole
vemon swamp

Traps: 8

jar of greed
counter counter
draining shield
hero's rule 2
transmigration break
hard-sellin' zombie
d. d. dynamite
disappear

any tips would be great and helpful

[Kazzak]

if you want remove from play cards, go out and buy two or three of Structure Deck:The Dark Emperor.

[Ice-eyes]

I'm with Kazzak, and it'll help you to get the cards for a lineup like this (I'll post spells later) -
Monsters: 19
1 Raiza the Storm Monarch
3 Caius the Shadow Monarch
3 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
3 D.D. Survivor
3 D.D. Scout Plane
1 D.D. Warrior Lady
2 Apprentice Magician
2 Crystal Seer
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

[Kane-333]

I'm with Kazzak, and it'll help you to get the cards for a lineup like this (I'll post spells later) -
Monsters: 19
1 Raiza the Storm Monarch
3 Caius the Shadow Monarch
3 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
3 D.D. Survivor
3 D.D. Scout Plane
1 D.D. Warrior Lady
2 Apprentice Magician
2 Crystal Seer
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

To add to this
3x Dimensional fissure(makes survivor/scout plane invincible)
2x Reinforcement of the army(fetches your ace monster-survivor)
3x Enemy Controller(Survivor/scout plane abuse)
3x Cyber Valler(if you dont like the apprentice engine)
1x Morphing jar
2-3x Gravekeeper spy(if you play with monarchs)

Ps-(Dont play breaker if you go to tournaments.)

[Ice-eyes]

To add to this
3x Dimensional fissure(makes survivor/scout plane invincible)
2x Reinforcement of the army(fetches your ace monster-survivor)
3x Enemy Controller(Survivor/scout plane abuse)
3x Cyber Valler(if you dont like the apprentice engine)
1x Morphing jar
2-3x Gravekeeper spy(if you play with monarchs)

Ps-(Dont play breaker if you go to tournaments.)

This was posted in the TRADITIONAL section. With you on the changes, but Valley isn't so good now Return is Limited and DimFus gone, and GK Spy isn't so good here because you've got enough fodder anyway. You'll want to put in some Traditional staples like Pot, Graceful and Raigeki.

[Kane-333]

This was posted in the TRADITIONAL section. With you on the changes, but Valley isn't so good now Return is Limited and DimFus gone, and GK Spy isn't so good here because you've got enough fodder anyway. You'll want to put in some Traditional staples like Pot, Graceful and Raigeki.

Valley has major synergy with survivor and scout plane

[hypnodude]

I don't think anyone mentioned this but a Macro Cosmos would help a lot :D

[ayuto56]

thanks for the tips guys they were very helpful

[ayuto56]

the deck is working much better thanks to your tips thank you guys

[Ice-eyes]

Yeah, could you post your current version so we can help some more? Edit it into your original post.