My Fiance's Deck: Wut Do You Think?

[Dream3r]

As you can tell from her deck below, its theme is Harpie.What She wants to know is how to improve it so that she can actually win against me. I have Taught her everything there is to know about this game, But she wants Advice from others. (the student wants to surpass her teacher) Help her out please.


Monsters: 20

Harpie Lady 1(2x)
Harpie Lady 2(2x)
Harpie Lady 3(3x)
Harpie Lady Sisters(2x)
Harpie Queen(1x)
Harpie Girl(1x)
Harpie's Brother(2x)
Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon(1x)
Slate Warrior(1x)
Raiza the Storm Monarch(1x)
Vortex Trooper(1x)
Flying Kamakiri #1(1x)
Magician of Faith(1x)
Kuriboh(1x)

Traps: 7

Call of the Haunted(1x)
Trap Hole(2x)
Solemn Wishes(1x)
Raigeki Break(1x)
Hysteric Party(1x)
Dust Tornado(1x)
Icarus Attack(1x)

Spells: 13

Harpies' Hunting Ground(1x)
Elegant Egotist(1x)
Swords of Revealing Light(1x)
A Feather of the Pheonix(1x)
Tornado(1x)
Mystical Space Typhoon(1x)
Tribute to the Doomed(1x)
Mirage Tube(1x)
Gravity Axe - Grarl(2x)
Axe of Despair(1x)
Sword of Deep-Seated(1x)

Total cards: 40

[Sparda9000]

First, since you can only have a combined total of 3 harpie ladies, the sets of harpie ladies, will have to go.
-3 harpie lady 2
-3 harpie lady 3
-1 Harpy girl
-1 magician of faith(now on the restricted list)

-1 Tornado
-1 Sword of the deep seated
-1 Mirage tube
-1 Tribute to the doomed
-1 feather of a phoenix
-2 Gravity axe gnarl

-1 call of the haunted(banned)
-1 Solemn Wishes
-2 Trap hole

+1 Flying Kamikiri
+2 Harpy Queen
+2 Harpy pet baby dragon
+1 Slate warrior
+2 silpheed

+2 Harpies hunting ground
+1 Elegant egotist
+1 Heavy Storm
+2 Lightning vortex
+1 Monster Reborn

+1 Torential tribute
+1 Icarus attack
+1 Rageki Break
+1 Dust Tornado

Sorry if I reconfigured your entire deck, but I had to bring the deck to the current ban list and make the deck more focused on teh harpies, and their amazing control with their field spell.

[Dream3r]

So Lets See,

Monsters: 20


Harpie Lady 3(3x)
Harpie Lady Sisters(2x)
Harpie Queen(3x)
Harpie's Brother(2x)
Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon(3x)
Slate Warrior(2x)
Raiza the Storm Monarch(1x)
Vortex Trooper(1x)
Flying Kamakiri #1(2x)
Kuriboh(1x)
Silpheed(2x)


Traps

Torential tribute(1x)
Solemn Wishes(1x)
Raigeki Break(2x)
Hysteric Party(1x)
Dust Tornado(2x)
Icarus Attack(2x)

Spells

Harpies' Hunting Ground(3x)
Elegant Egotist(2x)
Swords of Revealing Light(1x)
Mystical Space Typhoon(1x)
Axe of Despair(1x)
Heavy Storm(1x)
Lightning Vortex(2x)
Monster Reborn(1x)

[Dream3r]

Monsters: 20


Harpie Lady 3(3x)
Harpie Lady Sisters(2x)
Harpie Queen(3x)
Harpie's Brother(2x)
Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon(3x)
Slate Warrior(3x)
Raiza the Storm Monarch(1x)
Vortex Trooper(1x)
Flying Kamakiri #1(2x)
Silpheed(2x)


Traps

Torential tribute(1x)
Dimensional prison(3x)
Raigeki Break(1x)
Dust Tornado(2x)
Icarus Attack(1x)

Spells

Harpies' Hunting Ground(3x)
Elegant Egotist(2x)
Swords of Revealing Light(1x)
Mystical Space Typhoon(1x)
Axe of Despair(1x)
Heavy Storm(1x)
Lightning Vortex(2x)
Premature Burial(1x)
Monster Reborn(1x)

[juggaloian]

In my opinion..

-2 Harpie Lady #3
+2 Harpie Lady #1 (raises attack plus harpies hunting ground = +500 atk)

-2 Silpheed
+2 Bladefly (raises another 500 atk for a combined total of +1000 atk to most of your monsters when on the field)

[Dream3r]

In my opinion..

-2 Harpie Lady #3
+2 Harpie Lady #1 (raises attack plus harpies hunting ground = +500 atk)

-2 Silpheed
+2 Bladefly (raises another 500 atk for a combined total of +1000 atk to most of your monsters when on the field)

Good Idea!I Thought of it but didn't write it down.

[Ice-eyes]

What about that Owl thingymajig? And this should be in the Advanced Casual section.