Rate my deck

[Elijah]

Hey, im not sure what you would call my deck or if it is even good, but please rate it.

46 cards

23 monster

Royal Keeper
Pitch-Black Warwolf
Legendary Jujitsu Master
2 Master Kyonshee
Stealth bird
Big Core
Dragon Zombie
Opticlops
Gigantes
Newdoria
Blue-Eyes white dragon
Lord of D.
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp
Dark Driceratops
Roc From the Valley of Haze
Battle Ox
Partician of Darkness
Element Saurus
Mirage dragon
Frontier Wiseman
Ryu Kokki
Jowls of Dark Demise

9 Trap

Narrow Pass
just deserts
ulitimate offering
2 reinforcements
2 trap hole
Disturbance Strategy
Nutrient Z

14 magic

2 monster reborn
fissure
book of Taiyou
Ookazi
the flute of summoning dragon
change of heart
dark hole
back to square one
ekibyo
Malevolent Nuzzler
heart of clear water
invigoration
flint


Thats my deck and i just hope that i could get some pointers and tips.:)

[maku]

it looks like a mix of dark and dragon.. now u have two choices of decks to make so far? which one u want me to make?? (with wut u got and some additions of course)

people add me (this is never gonna work is it)
maku_sportsfan@hotmail.com

[Elijah]

dark would be good.

[maku]

okay
this may take a while since i'm kinda busy

[maku]

can u add me , it would really help?(my addy is already on the forum). i won't have to keep coming back to these forums

[maku]

why couldn't u pick dragon. it's easier to make. U still want dark?

[Elijah]

doesn't matter either one

[maku]

DRAGONS IT IS

DROP these mosters:
pretty much all of them

drop these magic and traps:
u can only have one reborn man!!!
everything except hole ,change,reborn,trap hole,ultimate offering

ADD THESE mon:
3 spear dragon
3 masked dragon
2 lord of d
1-2 tyrant dragon
1 exiled force
1 cyber jar
3 luster dragon
1 tribe-infecting virus
2 armed dragon lv3
2 armed dragon lv 5

spells:
1 change of heart
1 snatch steal
1 premature burial
1 swords of concealing and revealing light
2 creature swap
2 stampeding destruction
2 flute of summoning dragon

Traps:
1COTH
1ring
3CEDevice
1 spell shield type-8 or jammer
2 dragons rage

that will be exactly 40

[Elijah]

what about if i wanted to make it a dark deck?

[maku]

okay
then wait again please i'll make a dark one this is alot harder
wut kind?
beatdown
necrofear
archfiend

[FiendMasterCVN]

its not that good i would give it a 6/10